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TABLE 41 by Joseph Suglia
Table One
You are on the beach, watching the swaying of the waves. The waves sweep across the steeps like a flock of stampeding sheep speeding over the steppes, the snaking waves hissing over the driftwood steeped in the sandy wrack.
A squadron of gulls lifts uneasily into the air and then dissipates against the grey sky. You look meaningly at the gulls. They hover, the flurry of gulls. The gulls lull heavily in the air, squealing their dull squeals.
You incline your head downward and stare at the inrushing waves, each one a hungry-mouthed sheep, coming toward you ravenously. The water is deliquescent twenty feet from the shore. Beyond the shoal, the surface seems lacquered, solid, unbreachable, enameled, brackish, thick, as if it were a spreading mass of viscous aquatic jelly. From the shore, you cannot fathom, through the spume lid, the pelagic fathoms. The lake’s lid is swarming with wavelets, each one undulant and alive—afroth, the lake’s lip, frosting wisps.
You listen to the shifting of the water and the sifting of the silt. You watch the interleaving waves and the tempest of gulls.
The shadows of the gulls couple and uncouple, dancing on the drowning deluge, dancing on the shallows.
When the water rushes, it whishes; when it draws back, it seethes. The waves comb; the water-spasm draws close, then subsides, receding into the lush foam.
A woman, around thirty, is thirty feet to your right, recumbent on her beach blanket. She is violently shy and teething a toothsome nectarine. She has with her a nectarine grinder and a bag of nectarines. She grinds the fruit to pulp, pulping to the beat of a soundless music.
The water sluices into torrents. They rush to your feet.
You raise yourself and shake off the sand. You walk along the shore, looking at the water as you walk. A beard of kelp dances beneath the thin film, the eiderdown of sea-grass. A crab scuttles over the slickenside of a sea-rock.
You see a gull on a bulkhead, devouring a fleshless mollusk. The gull pulls out the gut and swallows the unchewed meat.
The gull squawks.
You see loping teenagers in the distance. A hipster is strumming his guitar on a beach blanket. Beside him, skintart girlfriend is chewing chewing gum with her mouth open. Her head resembles the head of a grouper.
There, an old man eating his soup. He looks like a duck dunking its bill into a bucket of muck.
You are drifting toward the pier. You hear the crackling of shells and the cackling of gulls. Combers comb the surface of the lake and strike the shore.
Spreading frostiness. The frothing is spreading over the sand.
See the motorboat sharking through the waves. The boat splits the foam, leaving a frothy trail in its wake. Tire tracks furrow the sand. There, bottle caps and crabs’ claws. A mass of striped shells, an exotic tapestry.
You step into the blue water. The water is cool. Tendrils of kelp envelop your feet.
Flows come in from the hazy juncture of water and sky, fluxes of light and spume. It becomes easy to imagine that the white waves are manitous, coming to claim your soul. Spangles scintillate on the surface of the beach, light refracted from the fragments of beached beer bottles. Bespangled beach-desert.
A feather is dancing in the air. It arcs, spirals, and whirls, sailing around in an anxiety of movement. The feather is confused. It cannot decide if it wants to move upward or downward or to waft away, buffeted by the breeze.
A pair of gulls trots across the sand, strutting in zigzagging formations, traversing your meandering shadows. In the aquatic waste, a thin gull roosts, propped on a buoy. Above you flutters a hurricane of gulls, screeching and cawing.
The platoon of gulls hovers, then dissipates.
The lake is blackening. You step out of the water.
Shaped like ovaries, shaped like melting hippopotami, black clouds unfurl across the sky, trained by ethereal forces, at supersonic speeds. One flocculent mass after another, they flop about on the aerial stage; the autodynamism of clouds, self-moving vehicles, entrances you. They are weighty with the pendency of rain.
Now the waves are bursting violently against the shoreline, and a thickening layer of water is covering the expanse of sand.
Towering above you now, the crests are white with angry foam. They are ramming the shore, spraying your eyes. The sand is invisible, only the waves leaping into the air and colliding. As tentacles, As lampreys, they embrace one another, seething liquid tubes. It seems as if you were encased in a glass tank slowly filling with bubbling gelatin. The black waves are engulfing everything.
The maw of the lake surging toward you, you step backward.
The sky darkens soundlessly. You are watching the broken sky, walking backwards, crab-like, across the sandy waste. You feel a chill and shiver at the emergence of something terrible foaming in the firmament.
Above is madness. A whorl of clouds, a raging maelstrom, the flashings of a celestial chandelier. The clouds are black and oily and spreading apart; they are floating over you, wagging their cilia menacingly.
The sand is spongy and moist. You are sinking, your clothes heavy with rain.
You fall to the sand, curbing your knees.
From the waves comes a sea-child with kelp in his golden hair. It is a boy. You can see his shape in the lunar semidarkness.
He is coming out of the water. What does the boy look like? Is it even a boy? Yes, it is a boy or something like a boy, something or someone that looks like a boy.
Who is this nautical angel who comes from the lake? Who or what is this aquatic messenger? A shiny white boy, his nacreous skin glistening.
The boy has no eyes. You can see this as he walks slowly toward you through the gusts and the thrashes. He has no eyes and is gazing at you eyelessly. No, he has eyes, but his eyes have no pupils. Oviform pupil-less eye-globes.
His eyes are wholly white, and he is gazing at you whitely. Or is he sightlessly unaware of your presence? He wafts past you now.
The storm grows ever-more truculent and is pounding you with its violence. You are alone. The sea-boy vanishes into the city of Chicago.
Copyright 2019 by Joseph Suglia
If you would like to see and listen to a video in which I read my entire novel Table 41, go here.
Hello, Joseph!
Your writing is certainly most impressive and your choice of words most evocative! You are a writer of no small talent.
Please keep up the remarkable work and know that I wish you continuing growth and success in your own career as a writer.
All best,
Jay Pochapin
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Jay, I sincerely apologize for the lateness of this message. Would you like a copy of my book? Joseph
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i am so drunk and i dont know what im sayyyyyyyyyiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn…
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Hello, Joseph. I love your writing.
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Kia Ora Joseph,
great writing!
Cheers
Samizdat
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look i admit i dont have nothing to say but im here right now
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Interesting writing style. I like phrases like “tempest of gulls,” “drowning deluge,” and “exotic tapestry.” They present an intriguing interpretation of what they describe.
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Gattodisangue, this reply to your comment is absurdly late. Please accept my gratitude for your kind words. Would you like a free copy of the book? Joseph
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I skimmed through part of Table 1 and liked what I saw but hate reading anything of any length on my computer. Do you have this available in any of the ebook reader formats?
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Harvey, I don’t know how your message escaped me. Please let me know if you are still interested in a copy of the book. Joseph
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Do you have this available in any of the eBook formats? If not, can you make it available that way? Many advantages over reading from a blog site.
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Great writing! This makes me think of my youth in Gary. The beach and the grey overcast of clouds. “The lakes lid is swarming with wavelets…” I love it. Thanks for the trip.
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I don’t want you to say that in the video. Do the video again and read Pslams 3:2.
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i’m a professional editory myself so i know my way around writing. feel free to point out any errors in my response, however, id remind you im off the clock and this is a response to yr book not a thesis, i will not waste my time perfecting it.
read psalms 10:4
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what was that doggie doing in the video interview on your page. idont understand what the doggie was doing there. can u pls splain the doggie in your video interview on your page.
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Wonderful writing! Looking forward to reading more from you.
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awesome it really gives you the imagery of the beach
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I found this blog. 🙂 I read table one and I’m sucked in! WIll be looking forward to reading more.
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When I read this, I imagine it must be done slowly, like each sentence is a dark chocolate truffle meant to be enjoyed in small flavorful bits. The imagery is clear and descriptive. Nice vacation for my brain.
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Lovely, skilled writing!
PJ
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What did I just read please? Can you give me a quick overview? 🙂
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While I dislike directive narrative, simply because I dislike being directed in fiction, I enjoyed the colorful and descriptive vocabulary. Nice work!
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yours is great too
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something is goin on here but i cant say what it is
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red turnips and beet roots are where its at
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I like how the imagery described here on Table 1 goes back and forth between lake and ocean descriptions. The ambiguity of this back and forth creates an air of mystery as well as giving a mental recreation of the lapping of the waves.
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Your diction is stupendous, sire.
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Love the use of narration here!
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Dr Joseph, God’s blessings to you in the name of jesus Christ.
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i dont like so many big words. Rewrite your storie with not to much desriptions. Get to work now. To much desriptions are to much. Rewrite the storie now. I look forward to hearing from you. Get to work now.
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i need u to stop usin big words. change u right now or there gonna be real mad! Get to work. get all the big words out. i dont no big words.
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grammer is not important. as Hozier says get off of your fine lookin high horse NOW! Rwrite it again.
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You are The Doctor. Thank you for the great escape and pull back into the writing and reading world. Look forward to reading the rest, perhaps with a 2 a.m. hot chocolate.
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i am givin you a C but youd better redo the whole thing right now. i dont like so many big words. i no all of the big words but i dont like the big words. redo the whole thing right now or im gonna be real mad. dont use so many big words. youd better hurry up and do it now or ima gonna get real mad at you.
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i read ur book
u write this thing
and i no everything
and i got to tell u something
u need to do something
with the words or something
they to many words or something
thats why imma tell u something
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stop usin all those sinonims. Dont use so many sinonims. Stop tryin to be “smart”. Re write the chapter and then get back 2 me. i am a professional copy editer. u need my services. contact me so that we can arrange a contract
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Being a writing amateur, I am utterly mad at myself for not having English as my maternal language so as to be able to describe the feelings that I want to bestow on my characters and describing with great sensibility and tact the places that I want people to visit.
Your writing is strong, I am immersed in that place you have created, I could see everything, I will be the witness of a new ordeal and world, beautiful.
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I’m intrigued! Enjoyed Table 1. Love your writing and look forward to visiting each table in time.
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This really puts you in the scene, I shivered when you stepped into the water, you almost made me feel it!
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.Beautifully penned.looking forward to delving deep into your creations
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ok i really dont know what to say i gotta mit
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So generous of you to share this beautiful piece with us all. That is something truly inspiring. Superb chapter
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I stumbled across your blog and i am addicted to it! It’s beautiful! The imagery is so well put! Totally enjoyed it!
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Hi,
I’m not actually a heavy reader so those were some big words for me but that was honestly the most calming piece of writing ever. It was very therapeutic for me.
Thank you!
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Hi Joseph, I’ve just finished reading your Table One with such a strain of strong and vivid images, which fascinated and inspired me so much and which somehow reminds me of some of Antonioni’s films, and the writing style makes me think of The Wave by Virginia Woolf. And honestly, I enjoy more about the richness of Table 41.
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My name is Wade.
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Marvellous what a great post, so informative and beautifully written.👍👍👍👍👍
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oh my God …. in starting i m at beach enjoying the moment and then sudden change in weather along with that mysterious boy
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It’s a really great writing, I can feel myself in the story. love it!
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Great work. Love the 2nd person POV
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As with your previous acknowledgement, I must say that I find the 2nd person POV extremely alluring! Wonderful array of language here, which never fails to excite a poet like me, who chooses only to use few words.
I imagined vividly the nectarine pouring into the sand and mixing with the ocean like an egg yolk, cracked and free. Your writing inspires the imagination, and teases the ego too.
Definitive style and atmosphere create here Joseph, if only a tad on the wordy side. Beautiful and elegant scene shaped here, pleased to keep reading!
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This is delicious, you rhyme like a madman. Downright tasty.
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Fascinating. Beginning to read I was reminded of Italo Calvino’s Mr Polomar – on the beach.
I chime with the approach to writing you mention in your interview. I write for myself.
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As I lived this piece of your tale, I felt myself there, enjoying the fantastic word choice that guides your beautiful, changing image. Bravo, for educated writing that leaves the reader thirsting!
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Wow, this is really awesome. From the weaving of the scene and words, great talent.
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Very descriptive, I could see and feel everything! Bravo.
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Amazing! I love how descriptive your words were, and the similes/metaphors you used were fantastic. Again, amazing!
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I read. I saw. Thank you for inviting me to the Table.
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Cool:)
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